Here are my edits from last time. I have the audio synced and the typefaces chosen. The speech goes by fairly quickly, so the effects and animations will have to be short and to the point. I also need to find some good music for the backing track, something upbeat and inspirational.
I think it is really good so far! I would maybe like to see some variation in color!
ReplyDeleteI love this! I would agree with Laney I think the next thing I would do is maybe add a color for some important words or maybe entire phrases could be different colors.
ReplyDeleteReally like the composition you have going on! I would just be careful that when you start doing effects, you take care to make sure that they don't disrupt the flow of reading too much since it is quite fast paced as you said. And just be wary of having too much left-right-left action with your words (the "and our" before "family had to do" is just slightly jarring). But wonderful overall!
ReplyDeleteGreat message and nice diversity of fonts and placement. I agree with Emily, and would be careful with effects since he speaks so fast, it might make the text too hard to read.
ReplyDeleteWoahhh! You got super far - I like the font variations
ReplyDeleteLoveee the different typefaces without it getting to much, the audio is great too!
ReplyDeleteYour emphasis on the words here is great! Since the speech goes by fast you could add some color variation to add further emphasis since you said your animations will be short. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job with the timing of each words with how fast it was. I think color could be something that is more impactful in this. Maybe certain words get their own color?
ReplyDeletei love the fonts you are using; it makes it very interesting to watch and keeps my attention.
ReplyDeleteI like seeing this variation and Jim Carrey is already very charming and intriguing so I don’t think there is too much needed to help emphasize and use too many effects
ReplyDeleteI like the groupings you're making with parts of the text. It really adds some good emphasis!
ReplyDeleteHi Trey Nice sound editing, I would work on just that tiny little bit at the end "doing what you love". Really just the word love. Worth trying to clean that up, noise reduction in Audition. You are right tho that music might help disguise that. Very nice work so far, you are in a good place working on hangtime (if any) intros and outros.
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